Friday, October 17, 2008

This day

The light reflections
make it better.

So young.
So China Doll.


William Keckler said...


I love the way that two line poem is like an entire piece of short fiction all by itself.

I could so see Brautigan putting that as an entire story in The Revenge of the Lawn.

But only he or you could come up with the perfect title for it.

Some machine sounds like a dinosaur outside my window.

How do I know what dinosaurs sounded like?

William Keckler said...

I love your minimal window.

how do you catch nature thinking like that?