Thursday, October 8, 2009

For warmth

                blue hat
           baby        under
        a                        my
  wore                        pink
    I                               is
                                   for
                                 girls
                             hooded
                           sweatshirt.

4 comments:

William Keckler said...

love the ambiguity of the concrete poem when we're not sure what it is...

when it's so obvious what it is, i get annoyed...

this one is unannoying...could be a candy cane or The Grim Reaper...or...or...

Rachel said...

it's a yoga pose, the dolphin.

I'm glad I didn't annoy you. Irksome was my favorite word when I was 16. I was a brat. I hope to be over the brat phase but you never know. This CT sarcasm gets me all the time. I don't even know I'm doing it. haha

Thanks for coming over! Love Rachel

Scott said...

Huh. I thought it was the hood. In profile. With the negative space under/between the words for a head.

Rachel said...

thanks for killing my joke Scott. lol. You are correct, it's the hood. :)